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    It's finally time to let go.

    "Look Alfred. It's cool, really. Just...go to her, you love her more than me, right?"
    A baffled look adorns the American's face. "B-babe? Wh-what are you talking about?"

    "Don't call me that! And...and don't lie to me! I know that you are seeing someone behind my back right? I know that because I have always known that sooner or later, the guy I am going to date will have found someone much more important than that of the current girl he's dating"

    I lifted my hands off of his warm and large ones and tried to put on a smile on my face. No, I shouldn't cry in front of him, but it hurts so much. It hurts to be feeling this way. It hurts that I am not his beloved anymore, but someone else. But then again, I've been expecting this in my relationship that I would be going to have so I am long been used to seeing expressions and reactions like that.

    With a sigh, he gives me a concerned-sad look of the sort. "I-I'm so sorry about that (Name), please I---" "Save it Alfred, say those sweet words only for her. Let's just face it, I am a complete and utter failure as a lover. So I can't really blame you if you cheated on me while we were dating" I said to him in a straight and nonchalant face.

    "Are you really sure about what you're doing (Name)?'re just letting me go?" I just nodded at his query and smiled again once more. "Yes, it's because I know that it would be for the best for the both of us. Don't worry about me. You know, as long as you're happy with her, I will be fine. Now, don't screw your relationship as badly as you screwed mine..." with a gentle nudge on his back, he then got the hint and started running out of the park with a heartbreaking smile on his face, eager to meet his girl and claim her to be his.

    Once he was out of my vision, tears started to blur my eyes and no sooner than that I began wailing loudly at the empty park where I was. And from there I burned and etched into my soul, from that first and last relationship I ever had with anyone, to promise to never love anyone again for my heart was crushed into a million pieces, with no way to replace the glasses or try to fix them.

    Goodbye my dear...
     It was fun, while the love lasted....
; u ;
Me and my pessimisstic views on romance.
I am having a feeling that I would end up like Reader-chan here.
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queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I feel like.... I feel like.... someone took a bite of my mango and threw the mango on the ground... Poor  mango....
RaichuFan12 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
But... The mango had so much to live for!
niruroko59 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  New member Student Artist
I hope that one day.. Alfred will realise that R-chan is the one he really loves.. 
This is bloody heartbreaking.. 
princessluv123 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student Writer
my kokoro!Pikachu Crying Plz 
XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
my heaarrrttt it hurrrrttsss....But i looooveeee it so muuuuucchhhhhhh..~!! <3
badDEATH15 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
It's hurt and so sad. ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch!!
HetaliaLover10113 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
Would anybody enter my contest? Details are provided on my profile! Please click on it! I need to do this! Thank you! Please comment too!
CursedQueenPMC Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
It's bad that I enjoyed the heartbreak in this.....
eclipsethewolf2882 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Rite in da feels
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014   General Artist
this kinda reminds me of 'Depression of a Young Literati' where the guy just grows old with no one ;A;
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