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    It's finally time to let go.

    "Look Alfred. It's cool, really. Just...go to her, you love her more than me, right?"
    A baffled look adorns the American's face. "B-babe? Wh-what are you talking about?"

    "Don't call me that! And...and don't lie to me! I know that you are seeing someone behind my back right? I know that because I have always known that sooner or later, the guy I am going to date will have found someone much more important than that of the current girl he's dating"

    I lifted my hands off of his warm and large ones and tried to put on a smile on my face. No, I shouldn't cry in front of him, but it hurts so much. It hurts to be feeling this way. It hurts that I am not his beloved anymore, but someone else. But then again, I've been expecting this in my relationship that I would be going to have so I am long been used to seeing expressions and reactions like that.

    With a sigh, he gives me a concerned-sad look of the sort. "I-I'm so sorry about that (Name), please I---" "Save it Alfred, say those sweet words only for her. Let's just face it, I am a complete and utter failure as a lover. So I can't really blame you if you cheated on me while we were dating" I said to him in a straight and nonchalant face.

    "Are you really sure about what you're doing (Name)?'re just letting me go?" I just nodded at his query and smiled again once more. "Yes, it's because I know that it would be for the best for the both of us. Don't worry about me. You know, as long as you're happy with her, I will be fine. Now, don't screw your relationship as badly as you screwed mine..." with a gentle nudge on his back, he then got the hint and started running out of the park with a heartbreaking smile on his face, eager to meet his girl and claim her to be his.

    Once he was out of my vision, tears started to blur my eyes and no sooner than that I began wailing loudly at the empty park where I was. And from there I burned and etched into my soul, from that first and last relationship I ever had with anyone, to promise to never love anyone again for my heart was crushed into a million pieces, with no way to replace the glasses or try to fix them.

    Goodbye my dear...
     It was fun, while the love lasted....
; u ;
Me and my pessimisstic views on romance.
I am having a feeling that I would end up like Reader-chan here.
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onlysoperf891 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my kokoro is brokoro
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Student General Artist
pls sequel.

Well you don't have to do it

But Eh

I will love you if you do...

PS: I love your stories!
secretk11 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
*Positioning Sniper rifle*
While the love lasted.. *Eye twitch*
Yin02 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Reader-chan you will find someone I promise!
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student General Artist
I'm reading this while listening to I'm Still Hurting by The Last Five Years... I'm crying so fucking hard 
Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
NOOOO!!!!!!!!! I will go to Feli and Lovi's house cause they are my bestfriends! Their pizza and pasta will make things better!
Bossey Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Student General Artist
What a butcher knife....YOU BLOODY NOSE!!!!!!
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I feel like.... I feel like.... someone took a bite of my mango and threw the mango on the ground... Poor  mango....
RaichuFan12 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
But... The mango had so much to live for!
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Ready2Soar Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
But, when the mango goes into the ground, out comes a mango tree with...MORE MANGOES!
niruroko59 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Student Artist
I hope that one day.. Alfred will realise that R-chan is the one he really loves.. 
This is bloody heartbreaking.. 
princessluv123 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student Writer
my kokoro!Pikachu Crying Plz 
XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
my heaarrrttt it hurrrrttsss....But i looooveeee it so muuuuucchhhhhhh..~!! <3
badDEATH15 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
It's hurt and so sad. ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch!!
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CursedQueenPMC Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's bad that I enjoyed the heartbreak in this.....
eclipsethewolf2882 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Rite in da feels
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014   General Artist
this kinda reminds me of 'Depression of a Young Literati' where the guy just grows old with no one ;A;
Cleverangel22 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
OH MY GOD THE FEELS ... is it weird that i cried while reading

I love it ... Straight to the KOKORO(heart)
emzyblue Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
FoxTheMagnificent Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Feel like this would happen to me
soulsociety96 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
jee feels before going to an amusement park great! but awesome writing
MewEmerald Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mion - sama!this story you wrote is heartbreaking....But beautiful at the same time...Wait,your not Mion!
CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
sayaikari Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
T-That bastartd...  I-Im going to kill him Pikachu Crying Plz 
Faustita Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
-smiles sadly- -tears drops- -puts face in hands- -feels so emotional- (;
Blossomingwind Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconcryforeverplz: goddamn it Alfred!
CosmicXReaction Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
I cant believe he didnt cheat on me with england sooner...
Bossey Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Student General Artist
I know right??
Yin02 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Was it England? O.o
SometimesFox Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
damn it so much feel
ChinaTetoSan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist

This is beautiful..
tsukipurinsesu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student Writer
Oh gosh, thank you~
blightfighter45 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay, I have the same views
TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Cried a bit. ._.
That was depressing, but good.
There are always stories with happy endings, but it's nice to read a story with the opposite kind of ending. :)
minchen0897 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
oh, i think i would end up like Reader-chan too....
So you're not alone with those thoughts.
This is a well done story! I like it!
sasukeissohot97 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KiralovesKai Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm so sad now!!!!
Pokemon-Fan-The-FIRS Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student
JUST GO ALFIE GO............ but ill still love u :iconsadfaceplz:
Fab-912 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad T.T In a way this reminds me of the song "Anna (Go to Him)" . I listen to the Beatles version but its an old song so theres an original somewhere.

my-little-norgie Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: A-Alfie....... How could you do this meee.... Y-you bastard....... t(ಠ_ಠt)....  I am going to kill that biatch...... stealing my Alfie away t(ಠ_ಠt)
KenkoSpellCaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconcry-plz: so sad, but don't worry reader, there are plenty of people out there and one is bound to have a real connection with. Love isn't a race it's just happens when it is time.
tsukipurinsesu Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
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Sanactras Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student
MY FUCKING GOD. FUCK THIS, I'M GONNA GO KILL THAT BITCH! But first.. tears. :icontaigacraiplz:

Taking my Alfie away.. -.-
Rigi-san Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

MY FEELS. :icontaigacraiplz:
condy-candy Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D: F-Feels...
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